We're working on a different website for explaining the approach of the product.
Do you think that the following fails at explaining the idea of the product?
prismic.io is a different approach to content management.
It features a Writing Room for content writers to author and manage content,
and a Content Query Api for developers to integrate managed content into any website or app.
The paragraph you've posted there is very helpful - it gives me more of an idea of what the product as a whole does, and it does sound really quite interesting!
Even doing something like including that at the top of the current website would work wonders for giving an explanation before delving into finer details.
Do you think that the following fails at explaining the idea of the product?
prismic.io is a different approach to content management. It features a Writing Room for content writers to author and manage content, and a Content Query Api for developers to integrate managed content into any website or app.