Instead of "lived in a neighborhood with a high school mostly for rich kids", the line should say "had parents that not only let you tinker with their very expensive machine, but also encouraged you to apply to well-funded magnet schools".
My point - that you owe your success to growing up in that household to a larger extent than other "quirks of chance" - still stands.
Instead of "lived in a neighborhood with a high school mostly for rich kids", the line should say "had parents that not only let you tinker with their very expensive machine, but also encouraged you to apply to well-funded magnet schools".
My point - that you owe your success to growing up in that household to a larger extent than other "quirks of chance" - still stands.